I'm not a fan of Hetalia.
But if there's one thing this story is, it's the one thing that makes me want to watch it. Last Minute Decisions, a Hetalia fanfic by Queen Jackie on Quotev, is one of those stories that really makes you think hard about life in general.
Okay, I guess I'll get out of this sappy stage and skip right to the review, yes?
First off, I liked how you sort of created a "poemfic", you know when you incorporate a poem into a story? Sort of like a songfic, but it has a deeper meaning. Thumbs up for the creativity.
Also, the chemistry between Feliciano and Reader-chan? Perfect, absolutely perfect. It's also shocking how he knows that he had a crush on Ludwig, but kisses Reader-chan anyway.
Then, when Feliciano vents to Luddy about Reader-chan, Luddy wants him to be with her, but Feliciano chose Luddy instead. It was a bad choice in the end, as Reader-chan probably died sort of hating them.
It's also very very sad, when Feliciano finds out Reader-chan went off to war, but when you said that there was part of the note missing? Bam, that was perfect.
Then at the end, when the country is abolished and Reader-chan dies, Italy is seen talking to her as if she was still there. It was so cute! But at the same time, knowing that the person he loved died, it was also sad.
Overall? (Sorry about the short review but I said I didn't know much about Hetalia) I'd give it...4 stars! Thank you for letting me review your fanfic! -Seiko
But if there's one thing this story is, it's the one thing that makes me want to watch it. Last Minute Decisions, a Hetalia fanfic by Queen Jackie on Quotev, is one of those stories that really makes you think hard about life in general.
Okay, I guess I'll get out of this sappy stage and skip right to the review, yes?
First off, I liked how you sort of created a "poemfic", you know when you incorporate a poem into a story? Sort of like a songfic, but it has a deeper meaning. Thumbs up for the creativity.
Also, the chemistry between Feliciano and Reader-chan? Perfect, absolutely perfect. It's also shocking how he knows that he had a crush on Ludwig, but kisses Reader-chan anyway.
Then, when Feliciano vents to Luddy about Reader-chan, Luddy wants him to be with her, but Feliciano chose Luddy instead. It was a bad choice in the end, as Reader-chan probably died sort of hating them.
It's also very very sad, when Feliciano finds out Reader-chan went off to war, but when you said that there was part of the note missing? Bam, that was perfect.
Then at the end, when the country is abolished and Reader-chan dies, Italy is seen talking to her as if she was still there. It was so cute! But at the same time, knowing that the person he loved died, it was also sad.
Overall? (Sorry about the short review but I said I didn't know much about Hetalia) I'd give it...4 stars! Thank you for letting me review your fanfic! -Seiko